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Advise
by [deleted user]
Animator
[deleted user]
Experience
5 years
Time Taken
3 days
Description
Hi every one!
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Ben LaScala
Good work, but the film gate takes away from the work
Paula Decanini
Too much twitchy head shakes. Try to keep it simple.
Cory Parks
Lookin' natural!
Reginald Crumpler
I say great movement. Very fluid. But it has just a bit TOO much movement. Excellent piece.
JONG H. GOH
Like
Mic
Good bit of acting, maybe a stronger finish on the last word