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Business
by Larry Bryant
Description
A business man tells his boss about how prepared his is to take over the busines.
Comments
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William Barry Eggington
Elbow pops. . could use a lot more work.
Michael Kristiansen
Could be good with some improvements. Right now it is too much pose to pose, especially the first guy. More inbetweens + ease in and out would be good.
Eddie Higgenbottom
It needs more attention. Get in there play with the voice 2 there is a lot of twinning the arms in this competition
Good luck
Janice Quinteros Wachtendorff
El movimiento de los lapices esta de sobra, el golpe se ve lento y no daría para mover los lapices