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Office
The employee is going to sign a contract with another company, but he is timid and doesn't want his boss lose confidence in him.
Comments
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Samidha Kumar
work on staging and composition of the shot.
Samantha Schnauder
Could use a close-up shot from another angle
David Barrow
Really like this. Good acting, timing, everything. Only thing I'd change would be the camera angle just before he throws down the book so you could get the full effect of his menace. Maybe a little bounce on the book too to show it's weight and the force of the throw.
William Barry Eggington
Not too bad. Weird seeing the same character talking to himself.
Jo Anne Tan
First guy's hands are twinning a lot in poses and timing, and there needs to be improvement in the movement arcs. A lot of it looks stiff and jerky.