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Business
Description
A business man explains to his boss how prepared he is to take over the company.
Comments
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William Barry Eggington
Stiff and poppy.
David Barrow
Like the determined way the first character dropped his head before saying his second line. Only thing I might of added would be for the second character to raise his head as he turned around.
Jo Anne Tan
Lacks too much of the fundamentals. Do go back to the basics and keep practising