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I won't fail you
Description
An animation by Juan
Comments
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Friska Bako
I understand the story but need to improve the animation.
David Barrow
Good expression and camera angle on first guy. The second just didn't look like he was about to die until he suddenly did. If he'd started sinking before his last line it might have made all the difference.
William Barry Eggington
About at the animatic level but I can see where it was going.