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El Fin

by Shawn Lee

Final Rating: 6.48. Finished #14 out of 223 entries.

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Animator

Shawn Lee

Experience

Degree in animation

Time Taken

5 days

Description

I won't fail you

Comments

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Jaimee Cowart

Very clever good job! great use of ethos the only critics is that i would like to see the first fish say the hole first phrase but thats just personal opinion, very nice job

Friska Bako

That is a nice fish animation. really fluid!

Bhattacharjee Sandipan

your plot is quite interesting. only afew things that i would like to say, just my opinion. you could have shortened the animation preceding the dialouge. the small fish could be made visible some frames earlier while saying i wont fail you. both the chef's hands in the end are quite frozen. i liked the acting of the big fish. all the best

Isaac Bautista

The only thing I think could use improvement is the chefs themselves. I know they're not the focus of the scene but sometimes they remain a bit too still.
Other than that it's great!

Sabrina Winkel

Wow this one is very nice. i LOVE the fish idea

William Barry Eggington

Great idea. Cleanly executed. Great job.

Sam Wilson

Really nice animation! I think you could get rid of the shot looking at the cooks backs. Its a bit confusing, at first i thought the cooks where the ones talking.

Davit Martirosyan

Cool idea and animation. Bravo!!!!!Top 5

Samidha Kumar

great idea...loved this one :)

Martin Strom

This is so dark but the animation looks really, really good! Both of the fishes fits pretty well with the voices and even though they look alike, you can feel they're different characters by the acting. The younger chef on the other hand could have been moving a little bit more.

Jo Anne Tan

The animation is so good! But it was hard to tell who was actually saying the first guy's lines.