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The FORCE

by Nassim Briedj

Final Rating: 5.09. Finished #45 out of 223 entries.

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Animator

Nassim Briedj

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

4 days

Description

Joe...heuu "LUKE" is asking a green fishboy....heuu sorry "YODA" to train him... May the force be with us!

Comments

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Jed B.

I like the quick turn. Lip sync is not too shabby. Careful hitting walls... keep it quick in the movements but soft in the landings.

Sabrina Winkel

There's a lot of courage and power in this animation! My favorite one i've seen

Isaac Bautista

The lip sync on "I'm not afraid" is a little off.
When the fish-like character sets his cane on the ground (at around frame 67) it shakes a bit as it settles into place. It happens again around frame 147.
I'm not sure if it was on purpose but it looks a little weird since it's only the cane and the end of the fin and I think if you meant to show some sort of shaky hands it would have looked better if it affected the rest of his arm/fin too.

William Barry Eggington

Not too bad.

Janice Quinteros Wachtendorff

La voz del monito verde no le viene al personaje que pones.

Jo Anne Tan

Nice! The lipsync could be stronger, and more subtle changes in the facial animation can make this much richer. But your body mechanics are pretty solid!