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Dispute
by Serj Chernov
The dispute in a company between subordinates and the boss
Comments
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Pranav Uttarkar
It is ok
Anais Larocque
The timming with the first character is nice !! But the facial expressions are not strong enough and the eyes are too wide open.
Samuel Couffe
Hey great work I like your animation :) I think it would be great to give more impact at the "like a peasant" moment, maybe making it faster and playing more with the shoulders ? You could add a bit more blink on the second character as well. Also I don't really understand what is he doing with his hand at the "fix this place up" moment, it is a bit floaty you can maybe make him doing a circle with his hand like "fix this whole mess". I love your timing and except a little interpenetration with the hand around the frame 154 and the eyebrows that I find a bit rigid, it is great I love your poses. Hoping this comment will help you, keep animating :)
John Tyson
I really like the movement implying the kick and the little movements all throughout.