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Rat Rebelion
im an Colombian autodidact, still learning
a few hours per day during this month
Wanted to give it more details, but cuz of the little time i got for this i think its a good result.
Excuse the lack of frames for the little rat at the rest of the acting... i finished it within 3 hours of the dead line :)
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Foon
Nice one
feloz
Awesome work !
Nathaniel Winckler
The characters are really well done and I could really feel the emotion of each. If I were being nitpicky, I don't care for the twinning pose around 55-69. It feels contrived/not natural. The sense of weight on both characters is spot on. I wish the SL character had all the inbetweens near the end because I'd love to see his scramble backwards. Well done!
Fabian
OH! Beautiful. I like the character design, the fluity, the acting and the idea. What a shame you couldn't finish it. : (
Ramsey Pierson
Very nice animation. Good body mechanics and performance. Missing IBs and BDs for character 1 after his lines, so incomplete, but very good nonetheless.
Ryan Hill
Great use of expression and attitude. On frame 80, I'd watch the speed and follow through seen in the younger rat's tail. His movements also feel rushed between frames 40 - 80, that's following his stronger action at frame 25.
Satya
Awesome work
Haritz TZ
The best animation overall, but the left rat becomes blocking towards the end. Still pretty high in ranking for me.
Michael Kristiansen
Awesome!
Brian W.
I could watch this all day. Amazing characters, great artwork and strong, frequent poses. Direction gets a nod as well with the way the non-speaking character doesn't distract even though there are no camera POV changes. I love this.