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Living like a peasant
11secondlube November2017 by Rasoul T Zarrin
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Zim
the beginning is so good but the last part a little less, did you ran out of time ? But I like it anyway, good job =)
Mehrdad Hosseini
Excellent
iman
exellent
Foon
Nice artwork, but take care of lips sync
Forrest Stull
Very nice movement and characters!
Alireza Tavosi
It is so professional and Attractive.
Fabian
The animation is well done but the story is confussed and the camera in the second shot is too open that you miss the acting of that guy. I would have used a long mid plane instead. I don't think we have to see the scenary. Anyway, good work, so fluid.
sina
Excellent
Ramsey Pierson
I love your posing, and character energy. I just wish it ended on a tighter shot between the two of them to see their expressions.
Razieh sadeghi
Verry good
Tara Howard
Gotta love so great traditional animation!
Omid mov
Good
Satya
Nice..
Asyraf Rashid
If only more time was spent on this,it wouldv been just perfect,with added color,lighting,shading,n much cleaner inking
Brian W.
Marvelous character animation. My only complaint is the wide final shot. Seeing this made my day.
delfo
great design and acting chices