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slowpoke and the carpenter
by abddine
hi everyone this is my first participation
i'm beginner in acting and i found this challenge a big opportunity to improve my level any C&C will be welcome
all your c/C are welcome
Thanks
Comments
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Zim
Lipsyn look a little bit weird, but good shot !
Fabian
Cool!. Nice acting, in especial with the koala. Just one thing, Is that hat tied to his head? (frame: 130). XD
feloz
Great job !
Ramsey Pierson
Very nice animation, great rendering, really pulls the whole piece together.
As far as your acting choices, I feel like your actions hit the wrong beats from the audio, ie "you ARE going to work today" vs what you did: "you are going to work TODAY." Just a little bit odd and detracting but your animation quality is really good.
paulmacmanus
excellenté
1st
ERRACHIDE Saad
good job, professional !!
John Tyson
It's incredibly smooth and there's a lot of movement without feeling cluttered, awesome.
Satya
Awesome
Florian Linet
Quite good, though the lips seems weird and the facial poses of Malcolm are too exaggerated for me.
The gestures of the koala when malcolm is speaking seem like they each have the same time between two poses and they're also a bit exaggerated
Brian W.
Beautiful work.
John Toland
Brilliant work, Render is great, lighting and shaders, but the Animation is really what sells it, great acting choices and personalities really shine