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Final Rating: 3.66. Finished #122 out of 149 entries.

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Experience

little experience

Time Taken

48 hours

Description

essay on frogs

a girl writes an essay on frogs, comes to her living room, talks to her frog, looks at her watch, says goodbye to the frog and runs off

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Darren Evander

floaty aniamtion and why does she runs at the end?it makes no complete sense,the frog is still in the cage.

Kyra Simone

When looking at the reference, pay close attention to how the wrist and forearm move when the shoulders move. That drag is going to help a ton with helping this model move more naturally. I think you can also exaggerate these expressions more, and if you aren't ready for camera moves then a closer camera angle would help.