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An odd pair
by María José
Description
A new employee at the elves' bakery.
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Richard Clark
Not bad! I feel like you could have pushed the motion at the end with "Don't touch me!" in some way. The posing could be stronger throughout. Did you shoot reference for this?
David S. Rodriguez
A decent animation with some improvement needed. The movements are stiff and should have more fluidity, especially with the character on the right who is moving the most and should have more exaggeration in his movements and his delayed reaction from getting touched should be remedied with more movement.