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by Kris Orozco
about a year - for as long as i've been in art school
1 month
homework i guess :o)
Comments
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Richard Clark
The performances are good! The staging is also good! However, why does the hand shake on the left character when they say "college"? I also feel like you're missing a frame at around 251 where the right character's arm swings from their left to right. It just disappears to the other side too quickly. But good posing and appeal throughout!
David S. Rodriguez
Frame 255-267 should have the left-most character back away further to convey the distressed look towards the other one in front. Some lines are broken throughout, but they are solid and the setting is clear but not distracting. Overall, it looks great!