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Ex-Soldier and Newbie's Mission
Description
The experienced survivor Sunny and a newly-trained survivor named Malcolm go on a dangerous mission.
Comments
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Richard Clark
I would recommend going back to doing the "bouncing ball" and "flour sack" exercise before trying human performances.
David S. Rodriguez
Lip sync needs work, and the movements could use some more arcs and improved timing with the dialogue. Still, everything else works.