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SLAP

by Ethan.P

Final Rating: 3.62. Finished #134 out of 152 entries.

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Animator

Ethan.P

Experience

I am a second year animation university student

Time Taken

took me a week+ start to finish about 10 hours

Description

3D animation made in Maya2025
no detailing/colour
Used the NORMAN rig

Comments

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Richard Clark

Not a good idea to have both characters in unison with their walking/marching animation. They should be slightly off of one another even if you're having them march together (if that was your intention). The bodies in particular I'm referring to. Plus, both are very stiff in the bodies.

Sam Hughes

Try having their walk cycles be at different speeds, as both of them being in-sync looks a bit uncanny.

David S. Rodriguez

Good, but their movements walk a little too coordinated and they are the same Norman rig. Still, good job!

Shura

TOP 1 DEFINITELY