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Veronica Yap

This has an awesome illustrated storybook quality to it!

Richard Clark

I would try different poses to break it up a bit. Both characters stay in the same pose mainly throughout. The character in blue does move more but I'm looking at the body and the body stays the same. Also, I would work on trying to keep things consistent with some of the elements in your piece. For instance, I noticed that the characters' hair grows out from the beginning to the end. And the dough continues to change shape after he stops rolling it.

David S. Rodriguez

Started off strong but some more dynamic movements and a vitriolic reaction to being upset and then outraged when he is touched. Still, animation is still solid and I admire the effort.