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Kit on a mission
This animation features my two original characters, Locrian and Kit.
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David S. Rodriguez
This is a great animated piece which could be improved upon with stronger and more connected lines as the lip sync is difficult to see with the brunette on the left of the screen and broken lines look too much like Dr. Suess which is easy to avoid. Still, excellent work!
Richard Clark
Your character designs are good but just animating the heads and limbs doesn't really appeal in animation. Plus, there's no indication that they are walking (if that was your intention) except for the audio. Turning it off, they are just standing there. Lip sync needs improvement. At the end, is the left character pointing at himself? Seems too on-the-nose solution and nobody would do that naturally. I'd try a more subtle performance than that.
Shura
Please finish this i like your style.