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Munch 'n Crunch-time
A human squire aspires to learn magic under the guidance of a short-tempered demon mage - who isn't fond of food in his lab.
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Veronica Yap
The ear animation is epic >:)
Richard Clark
Some nice stuff going on here! However, some of your poses could use improvement especially with the blue character in the first shot. Seems you're trying to fit a pose in the framing instead of just posing him better and readjusting the camera afterwards. Also, I feel like you're trying to hit every moment in his dialogue at the beginning with a big motion. I would maybe just choose the broad movement when he says "There's no eating" then follow with smaller movements.
David S. Rodriguez
This animation worthy of contending for the top spot, but the movements are too fast in some places, mainly the Leo rig moves too fast and sways too much and could be improved with having smaller and more subtle movements which would make the animation better.