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two doctors operating on a patient, one of them obviously should not operate on her
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Richard Clark
Interesting setup you've got! However, you've got the patient speaking one voice and then the other. Were you confused with who was talking in the audio? Lip sync needs improving too. Also, your camera shots with the patient are not consistent. He's straight on with the camera for most shots then you change it at the end... that's a bit jarring because you've already established the camera one way. It doesn't make sense to rotate the camera the way you did. It's also not clear with the doctor's positions. He's up front at first then somehow, he's next to the patient but you don't show that so I'm thinking "is there a 2nd assistant in the room?" And sometimes the camera flips 180 so that's also making it confusing with who's who in the scene. Aside from all that, the animation is not that very interesting. I would love to have seen some performances then just limbs or heads moving with lip syncing.
David S. Rodriguez
I am confused with who is talking here as there are three people in the room. Still, the animation is decent, and I like the back-and-forth dynamic between these characters.