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Arrogant nobles

by yukiang

Final Rating: 3.50. Finished #139 out of 152 entries.

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Animator

yukiang

Experience

0

Time Taken

1 month

Description

Arrogant nobles Ninja and poor baby Max

Comments

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Aaron C. Karlson

Not really sure what's going on here as far as story is concerned. This is where storyboarding and feedback early on can help clarify your intentions and make sure the audience is tracking. Nice poses!

Richard Clark

I would recommend going back to the basics like the "bouncing ball" exercise before taking on human characters.

David S. Rodriguez

I am confused as to the story, but the movements and timing are developed decently.

Shura

Very Boss. I like. Im so gay for this.