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Band Camp Troubles
A few animation courses
Around a day if hours are consecutive.
Jonathon is met with a strict band director as he gets ready at Band Camp.
Comments
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Veronica Yap
The table bump came out good! YEAH >:D
Richard Clark
A lot of swimming going on in your motion. I would work on picking and choosing when your character moves by creating more ease ins and outs, timing. Find moments to have some drag in areas as well as paying attention to the arcs in your movements.
David S. Rodriguez
I like the addition of Ray having a lollipop before playing his clarinet, but you can't play it with a pop in your mouth so I see why this is not a good time to eat. Still, I like the small movements and how timid Ray is to the harsh reaction. I definitely vote 10/11 stars!