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the alien and the general
a general confronts the lack of seriousness of an alien under cover of the government
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Veronica Yap
I love the nose boop so much!
Richard Clark
Ha...fun idea! The staging and camera cuts are good! The first shot of the alien on the couch, he doesn't have anything in his hand to eat. There's a lot of isolated movements going on. Example: if you're going to rotate the head and neck or limbs, the body should support that. The walk up with the guy in the hat is just moving the entire character up and down. You should try adding some secondary motion to that to convey weight. Throwing him out a window...that's extreme but funny!
David S. Rodriguez
Wow, definitely an extreme action. I love it!