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No eating allowed!

by Jorge Armendariz

Final Rating: 5.48. Finished #52 out of 152 entries.

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Animator

Jorge Armendariz

Experience

Since Im still a student, I would say around 2 years.

Time Taken

25 days.

Description

Hello!
This is my take on the dialogue. I had so much fun with these characters while doing this little animation.

Tags
2D

Comments

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ronda crom

4 stars

Cil Hoch

I think you'd be better off keeping the same angle that you had with the "you got any questions part" for when the second character touches the first. I love the designs of these characters!

Richard Clark

Ha! Fun idea! I think you ought to have a stronger line of action on the caped robot when he comes in, then have him straighten up when he stops. The smaller robot turning his head first then his body is a nice touch! Love your snappy actions!

David S. Rodriguez

Love how fluid this is, but the taller robot should be more offended at the shorter one for laying a metal hand on him before he yells at him. Still, great work!