Wedding

Veronica Yap

The staging on this turned out great!

Richard Clark

The motion is drifting at times. Body mechanics needs work. The way the guy in the white suit continues to walk and then stops when his body and the background has stopped already is a bit strange. The walking for both characters seems to have not been fleshed out. Even though you're not showing the entire walk from the feet, I can tell it's sliding and not making good contact on the floor. Also, the walks seem very wooden. Try working on overlapping and offsetting things with the different body parts to give it more life to it. You don't want everything htting the same frame.

David S. Rodriguez

The man in the suit should definitely see that his small companion eating before he says anything; however, everything else works and I personally like the scene's setting.