The job

David S. Rodriguez

Both characters should be colored black instead of blue against the empty white negative space. The characters are already well developed and I think their personalities could be fleshed out more by having a visual setting instead of an empty space. Still, it is decent and I see the effort put into it.

Richard Clark

Not bad. When the character on the right says, "not right off hand", his motion where his whole body turns towards the other character is a bit strange... it's too much. I'd say next time shoot reference of yourself doing the motion. FYI... that is one long nose.