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Boundaries
Ryan’s conversation with his new boss, a sensitive, eyeless humanoid.
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Richard Clark
Some interesting stuff in this one! Though, some of your choices are a bit odd. Example: Like when the right character rushes in on "you think you can handle it". I don't see that motion happening with that dialogue because there is no rush in his voice. Also, Is his hair a flame?... like Hades from Disney's Hercules? It doesn't seem consistent throughout. I also feel like the bump touch could be better with the smaller character. His body just moves in one pose.
David S. Rodriguez
Not bad, but I suggest closing the lines a little bit more and less broken for the left-most character on-screen. Still, not bad at all.