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Un joven va a su primer "misión" con la realeza, a cargo de él, un comandante con experiencia
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Richard Clark
Good character designs! The hand goes right through the other characters hand when he grabs the food. What each character is doing with their hand in the last shot is a bit strange. The larger character's hand appears to go through the other character like a side wipe instead of a quick pat on the back. I think that's what you're going for since the other character on the right does a similar move to match the other (which is a great idea...btw!!). However, it's not executed perfectly. I would try to improve on that. I feel like the side swipe isn't working because the characters are too close to one another; that there isn't enough room to side swipe each other... if that makes sense?
David S. Rodriguez
Good animation, and I feel like this is part of a larger narrative.