11seconds_Participation

ronda crom

6 stars

Richard Clark

Fun idea! On "give it the old college try" the hand movements on the one getting up is a bit strange and the way the open hand hits the other character then rests on his shoulder is also a bit strange. Did you shoot reference before you started?

David S. Rodriguez

I like the animation, but I am unsure if there should be three characters instead of two. Still, the animation is solid and moves organically. It's good overall, and their personalities are clear to the audience.