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Shroomin
A father and son's trip to the forest, where the son is feeling a tiny bit adventurous.
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Richard Clark
It doesn't look like the characters are part of the environment. I would remove the background image and just use a simple floor and set instead. The double bounce when the big guy squats down is unnecessary, at least with his hips. Have the upper body settle instead. It's hard not to touch the guy when he's in your space like that at the end. There are isolated movements throughout your piece. Nothing moves like that naturally. You need to consider that when adding any motion to the head or limbs.
David S. Rodriguez
Yeah, definitely not a time for eating when you are out in the wilderness and some mushrooms are not for consumption. Still, Superb job!
Shura
CAN HE BECOME BIGGER AFTER EATING IT?