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Cleaning the Tension Away
Cecilia's tired of constantly training all of the come & goers maids and wants to go through the process as quickly as possible. She won't tolerate any mischievous acts !
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Cil Hoch
I wish we could see more of the first character's face, but I love the scene you've set up!
Richard Clark
Why are they female characters? Motion seems very blocked out. Did you run out of time? Would like to see more animation principles applied here. It lacks ease ins and outs, not much secondary motion going on.
David S. Rodriguez
Without the timestamp on-screen, I would vote higher than 7/11, but still, the animation is solid and could use some more work on contrast so I can see the translucent characters. Still, congrats!