disappointment

Tierra

I like the expressions here, but the lip sync and body acting could use more work. I don't think camera movement is needed unless you use it the reveal the plushie. I would also have him look at the plushie towards the end.

Emma Soto

Hello! Great job! You have a lot of great poses and expressions throughout your submission. I also like the overall story you created. The cut to the bear is a nice touch. For a bit of feedback, I’d suggest adding weights to the keyframes so that there is more of a smooth transition between movements. Adding just a little bit of pause can go a long way!

Tally Smith

Your story is clear, and the camera cut effectively conveys the information without requiring extra work. There are some areas where the model clips, but the camera movement works well with the character movement to create strong visual interest.