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babyglutton
so it is a lovely baby!
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Dieguito Pritchett
hahahahahaha!!!! OUCH
Jimmy Horner
Work on the physics of your characters. Their weight adds a lot to the performance. Take that into account when they interact.
Danny Kneip
That's one feisty baby!! :D So the egg coming out of the pan is a real problem because it travels out at one angle, changes location in mid air, and comes back down at a different angle (F83 and F84). With the camera so far back, on both shots, it's hard to read the lip sync, but it looks decent. The concept is fun and simply needs additional polishing.
Simon HENRY
The animation is correct, but feel a bit robotic. For example, from 265 to 285, the head and hands of the dad are exactly synchronised, hence we can feel the keyframes you've set.
Try acting before you animate, and feel what moves at what time, you'll learn a lot from yourself !
Eva Elmo Leung
The lack of nose disturbs me. Animation is okay though.
[user]
Nice
Eshan
the camera was way too far in both the shots. you could have placed it a bit near the character