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Don't eat the caaaaaar!
Photoshop animation. Hand drawn on cintiq.
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Roger Crown
at frame 132 or thereof...you could of had fun with the arc of the action line.....make it more convex so the the action line curves more from the hips and up to the neck line ....and this way it would have had a more pronounced move
Danny Kneip
A good foundation, overall. This style of animation is not easy, but I applaud your effort.
Amari Harkness
You need a ground plane so the character won't look like he's floating in space. There are a few poses with confusing anticipation poses that makes it difficult to read his key poses. From frames 84-115, the anticipation is too much for a simple pose (at frames 107-118).
Some of the mouth shapes don't fit with the timing of the dialogue. Frames 0-72 are fine. But in the rest of the animation, there are either mouth shapes missing or not timed correctly.
Robert Firestone
Interesting animation. The audio/lipsync is off.
Dan Paris
Good drawings and fundamentals for the most part. It lacks some cosmetics to make a complete animation. In addition, the lip sync seems to stop short on a couple instances before the sound bite finishes.