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Car hunger
A man's large, robotic friend goes out of control.
Comments
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Robert
I can't see the little guy. Sorry.
Dieguito Pritchett
work a bit more on staging... I feel that I'm watching the robot the entire time because he's so huge and dead center of the screen and I don't get a chance to focus on your character's reaction... always remember to allow the viewer to focus on your characters' performance especially after all the work you did to animate them
Alex Mlqd
We can't see the acting/lipsync. Try to make better choice about composition, framing.
hamid
good but too much twining and no overlap at all
Oliver Pedersen
Many poses stick too long
Owen
When I see the size of the robot, I expect he is the main character of focus, but the small man is doing the yelling, a little confusing. A close up of the man with the big robot in the background may be more relatable. I like the basic gestures you chose for the man, they work.
Yuki Radcliffe
The movements are really good. I think this animation would benefit from some more close-up time on the human character's face.