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Don't Eat the Car!

by Katie Yancey

Final Rating: 5.12. Finished #37 out of 144 entries.

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Animator

Katie Yancey

Experience

4 years in school, 1 year professionally

Time Taken

a week and a half

Description

animation test for the October competition. A man tries to stop his big dumb friend from eating the car. I am an alumni of AnimationMentor.

Comments

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[user]

Animation could use a it more exxagerration

Owen

Great progression of gestures to the climax - tug of the arm - through to the anticlimactic ending. I 'got' the character all the way through. And I like the characterization of the orange hulk - just like an indifferent cow - great work. All that's needed maybe is some camera movement or frame change to keep viewer attention, and situationally/context wise, maybe some hints as to why the guy cares about the car.