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Squirrel VS Car
A man finds his new little friend having a taste of his car.
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Jimmy Horner
The character feels a bit bouncy when he yells at the squirrel. I think you missed some opportunity to show the squirrel and cover his mouth during the last line. Good work though especially the opening shot.
Oliver Pedersen
Parts are jerky and too fast
Owen
Great expressions, though I feel if he is truly intent on not wanting the car to be eaten he would race to try to stop the squirrel/frighten it away right about "NOT THE CAR!", and would have progressed the action a bit more, otherwise he could have been restrained for more comic situation, not being able to do anything about it.
Damián Navarro Méndez
he's moutgh is only saying "car", it's like you tried to avoid doing lip sync and mouth expressions, and try not to make his head shake or move so fast and stopping instanteneously.
Travis
Very good! Love the facial expressions at the end