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Final Rating: 4.66. Finished #54 out of 144 entries.

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Experience

5 months

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

one man had left his dog into the car but the dog is too much hungry

Comments

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Dieguito Pritchett

who/what's eating the car???

Owen

The start could be more expressive to match the voice, though the collapse into a hunch works. Would like to see what he is speaking to and maybe a visual tip on the mime story/circumstance.

Dan Paris

The staging is lost for me. When do mimes talk? jk. Also, the door slam was off from the sound bite. A nice animation though.

ibet francisco

Need stronger accent and pose on " thats a car"