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Not The Car
Sorry everybody but i didn't get to finish the whole thing. The semester has been busy but I gave it a try.
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Jimmy Horner
Camera changes break the 180 degree rule. Overall good animation.
Danny Kneip
Some good work here, overall, but you jump the line of action at F95 and potentially also when you cut to the bear at F78 - simply impossible to tell where every is situated. The lip sync is nicely done, overall, and the gestures are good.
K Thomas Fosse
Hmm.. It seems that the characters propotions changes (the arms and the hands).. The hands is like chubby and suddenly they're more like straight lines (sharp edges, etc.). Keep it up, I would really like to see how your work will improve over time.
Dan Paris
This is not ready for a review. There is a lot missing here, including a complete & clear lip sync. You have some good strong drawings working for you here...just needed to be finished.
Elmira Solo
work on your polishing/clean up, finish this one even though the competition is over. :)
Corentin
Could be really good if u finished this !
Yuki Radcliffe
Not a bad start. Look up the 180* rule ~ it definitely applies here.