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how to train your dog
by Antoine
Main character is a homeless living with a "monster dog".
My main goal here was to try to bring credibility with a cartoon/non realistic animation.
Comments
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Jimmy Horner
The camera is doing too much and distracting from the scene. I would stick to one or two angles for the way you created the scene. Good animation though
Simon HENRY
The head is very expressive, I like the eyes, great job !
But the hands seems messy, and are late sometimes, like on the "don't eat the car !"
And last thing, the mouth is still moving in the end, but there's no words.
K Thomas Fosse
I like the dynamic, bodylanguage and the expressions of the character.
Eva Elmo Leung
Audio and video are off by a second or two noticably.
Owen Fern
The camera cuts don't work very well, look into the 30 degree rule
Robert Mariazeta
Motion Blur won't be able to hide the fact that you need more overlap on your hands m'friend. fr 78 to be more specific.
Oliver Pedersen
The torso is a little stiff at times
Jon Sheldon
The lip sync and phonemes are off.
Danny Kneip
The lip sync might be really well done, but it's hard to read because of frames like F121 - he has a grey beard, grey teeth and the inside of his mouth by his tongue is greyish. F127 is an even better example. The movements and gestures are very fluid.
Alexandre Spontak
Good ! :)