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Busted
Description
A Guy who is trying to steal some classified document suddenly got caught by the security guard
Comments
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karan moshary
good job,, but there's less animation in it
loris
layout note: in the first shot the character goes right to left, in the second one he goes left to right...that's an error
Stéphane Sartori
Nice poses, However you should work more on the timing. Everything is very floaty.
Ben Hall
The problem is the movements are too slow sure he's sneaking around but even then the motions wouldn't look this floaty but keep at it