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History In The Walls
Description
Be easy on me, I'm a student and this is my first submission.
Comments
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Mackenzie
The lip movements are decent for a study on dialogue. The bodies of the characters are hardly moving, if at all. I'd also recommend putting both characters in the same shot, the camera angle changes are too abrupt.
Vedanth Panchoo
Where did the Maxes' noses go? D:
Evgenia Bozhenko
It's not beleivable that characters don't move thier body.
Mark Moran
godd base for lip syncing. not much if any body movement
Owen Doud
Not finished, should not be back and fourth between 2 characters. Work on principles.