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Ancient
Description
a man who satisfied about the ancient ruins
Comments
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Mackenzie
Character moves rigidly, especially the hands where the fingers don't appear the be animated at all. The lip sync is also a little off. Works well for animation practice, but still needs improvement,
Conway Dobbs
so slow at the start. shoulders are not natural and need more movement in the body. Remember all movement comes from the core. Even the smallest of movements.
talha bin khalid
Dialogue should be "you could smell the poo coming from the walls in here, yeah isn't that wonderful, not when the poo stinks" sorry couldn't help. Please work on basics.