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Heaven & Hell
Two brothers chatting in front of their fireplace.
Comments
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Robert Cartwright
I love the chill atmosphere of the scene you created! I haven't seen the actual scene but I imagine it would be in a setting kind of like this. You nailed the intonation of the voices in the body poses superbly! great work!
Elisabeth Janerka
Very strange framing where it is hard to see the characters' faces and therefore also hard to determine who's talking in the beginning
Nathaniel Vaughan
Not a lot of movement. The camera shot's a little far from the character's faces, so I can't get a good sense of how they feel.
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Seems decent, but still needs a lot more inbetweens and holds for each pose.