Guards

Joshua

Really need to clean up those lines, it was hard on the eyes.

Aaron James Mongcopa

Great camera subtle movements. I like the animation, it works! I can feel the intensity of their conversation.

Sean O Boyle

Fantastic rough!!

Julian Dill

Around the second half, the faces kind of lose any emotion.

Jad El-Khoury

very nice, could use more holds on strong poses

Maria

Lovely detailed characterizations and clean, clean work.

Richard Adams

The 3-dimensional feel of this is incredible. Weak point of this is the lip syncing. Work on improving the mouth shapes to better match the dialogue.

Susannah N.

This is really good! Awesome job! The only thing I can think of to improve is the movements with the second character seem a bit too quick at first

DarrenT

This looks rotoscoped, which doesn't really fit with the idea of the competition. It's very well done, but not animated.