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Firecamp
Description
The girl is telling an horror story in the middle of the forest...
Comments
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Richard Clark
Decent! However, it is a bit of a strange motion at the end with "you will" where the hand is up on the face and she's shaking her head and hand. I'm a bit confused by that. Is she wiping off her mouth or is she pointing at her listeners? It's not clear.