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You won't believe what I saw !!

by Clémentine Peyrusaubes

Final Rating: 6.78. Finished #14 out of 152 entries.

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Experience

6 months (still a student)

Time Taken

1 week (full days)

Description

A young girl makes an astonishing discovery in a creepy cemetary...

Comments

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Richard Clark

Lip sync could be better. Example: You're not hitting "p" on "planet". Not hitting the "oo" shape on "you". Doesn't look like your hitting the "m" on "me" either.