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Stephan Karuniadi - September 24

by Stephan Karuniadi

Final Rating: 5.45. Finished #26 out of 73 entries.

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Experience

Student

Time Taken

2 days

Description

Hi there, I'm currently trying to study 3D character animation. It's my first time trying this challenge out but please feel free to let me know if you have any feedback. Thanks.

Comments

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Muhundan Bala

I think you have the poses there, but the animation needs some work establishing and using the necessary principles of animation (timing, pacing etc..). I would say try and get awesome at the fundamentals of animation before tackling a complicated character such as this. Keep it up!

Moses Justin Ginaba

Concept needed

Richard Clark

Probably should think of some better acting choices. Her just standing there and looking back and forth could work but what you have is not strong enough. It's lacking weight throughout.