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Caught in the Act

by Drake Marasek

Final Rating: 5.35. Finished #27 out of 73 entries.

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Animator

Drake Marasek

Experience

Beginner level, only a few college courses.

Time Taken

A few hours every week for the past month

Description

Someone has been caught removing the evidence of their devious crime, but their response is calmer than expected.

Comments

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Joshua Eton

This is a very funny concept but I think you should add more context because I feel like there can be a bigger story to tell here. Like incorporating different camera angles for some parts.

Dante

you could hold the poses a little longer

Moses Justin Ginaba

Give a hint of the secret

rimi

crazy

Richard Clark

Did you shoot reference for this? The acting choices need improvement. He's constantly moving but not really moving to any goal (meaning he's moving too much. You need to pick your moments)