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This is really not a spaceship..

by Alex Rotterdam

Final Rating: 4.65. Finished #62 out of 183 entries.

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Animator

Alex Rotterdam

Experience

3

Time Taken

12 hrs

Description

I tried to overanimate him so that the focus lies more on him than on the object itself. So he presents the "timemachine" in an exaggerated way while he thinks about the "place" in the past.

Comments

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Chris Ter Berg

Nice poses even if 240 is to much drama for the soundtrack. Timing is an issue though

Tim Evans

Not bad at all. Bad decision for lighting as its so hard to see the facial emotions.

Ivanovich

so mystiphic

Danny Kneip

Slightly over the top, in general. I believe the timing of the lip sync if just off a frame or two. I like your ambition and the character's performance overall, but I don't think it's a perfect match to the audio. Additionally, the clackity-clack sound is a key component of the audio, and has been ignored.

Velid

Some very interesting moments! I would suggest another camera angle! Keep up the good work!